The Mandate of Earth has been revised for the third and final time.
The primary purpose of the revision was to tighten the writing even further while preparing the manuscript for a NEW PAPERBACK EDITION.
Last year, for the first anniversary of the book’s launch, I decided to take the advice of many reviewers who said it was well written and engaging but too long getting to the point. So that’s what I did. I cut 70 pages in that first revision and realized that the story remained as solid as ever.
This second revision cuts an additional 50 pages! It is remarkable what a two-year break from the text will do for one’s objectivity. This novel is now, without formatting, about 330 pages in length. Down from about 500 (formatted). A wonderful improvement. But don’t take my word for it, go read it yourself!
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